A Literary Journey into Consciousness

February 17th, 2017

Revision Checklist

Posted by Krystal Dillon in Uncategorized

After reading my feedback from Professor Tougaw and my writing group I realized that I have three major areas to work on in revising my essay.

  1. Thesis- I need to make clear to the reader what exactly my thesis is. Given that my readers still have questions about this shows me that I am not making a concrete argument and making my thesis easy to spot.
  2. Stance- I need to make clearer my stance in respect to the critics that I introduce. My voice often gets lost when I introduce a theorist’s point. I think that it would be helpful if I use the list of transition words Professor Tougaw gave out in class so I can make clear what motivating moves I am making in my essay.
  3. Conclusion- I need to WORK on my conclusion. Its sooooo hard to come up with a strong ending and I think in my last revision process I kind of lost the segway into my conclusion. So I need to go back and work on the best way to end my piece.

I think that I still have other areas to work on but these three will serve as my main focus for the next revision process.



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  1.    tracy said,

    on February 18th, 2017 at 11:34 am

    Hey! I think you have a really good checklist here and it’s very doable. Your thesis– from the last time i saw it– needed to be a bit clearer because it sort of changes throughout the paper. I thought your stance was clear, actually, but maybe it’s because I’m using what you’ve told me about your paper as a mode of understanding your stance. Your conclusion does need a tab bit of work but only because your intro was so good so you have a standard to live up to haha! Overall really good list.

  2.    Jason Tougaw said,

    on February 19th, 2017 at 10:25 am

    I agree with Tracy. I think the main thing is differentiating yourself from the other critics. It’s tricky because you basically agree with them, but you have a slightly different explanation for the gender stereotypes in the novel. It will be important to make the lines between you and the critics really clear.

    It occurs to me that one angle you could make more of is the idea Invisible Man is important and relevant despite the gender stereotypes. How? Why? How can we interpret it in ways that acknowledge its significance and those stereotypes?

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